Monday, June 7, 2010

The sound of hail

We have been investigating descriptive writing techniques and used the recent weather events as inspiration to create some interesting similes:

The hail on the roof sounded like...

- two hundred crayfish angrily snapping their claws. Jackson
- a little boy throwing pebbles at a fence. Charlie, Raphael
- a box of rice falling on the ground. Carmel
- hair clips dropping to the floor. Emma

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